Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Poetry Night- Alice, Anna, Kyra, Kayleigh, Marc, Jenny

Poetry Night is on Thursday March 25, 2010

Meeting Time: Tuesday

50 comments:

  1. WHAT IF WE
    What if we could make the tears of a child labourer disappear
    What if we could make sure polar bears have a place left on our world
    What if we could erase the fear from a patient with a deadly disease
    What if we could abolish the hatred in our society
    What if we could put an end to all the soldier’s goodbyes
    What if we didn’t have to cherish the clean water our country gets
    What if we weren’t still judge on our race, religion, age, gender, and abilities
    What if every single person in this world could get the help they needed
    What if we could change our world..........
    But wait we can


    I made this poem for poetry night. please give me back your feedback.

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  2. I know I'm not in you're group but I LOVE the poem Alexx!!!
    Samantha:)

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  3. WOW Alexx that is a very moving poem I love it greats job even though I am not in your group.
        

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  4. Alexx I think it's a great poem because I think it has a strong message.Good Job!
    Christine

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  5. Okay Alexx...
    THAT IS SUCH A GREAT POEM! I COULD NOT THINK OF ANY THING BETTER ! GREAT JOB! Alice :D

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  6. Alexx, that is a great poem way to go!! I think you could even use that as a slogsn for BTC.Adeline

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  7. Thats an AMAZING poem Alexx. It has such a meaningful message to it! We should defintely recite it in poetry night :)
    Anna

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  8. I really enjoyed reading the poem i love it. Jenny

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  9. I think that the poem Alexx wrote is perfect for poetry night! Everyone in the Be the Change committee has to do a poem because it will really promote the event! I agree with Anna, we should really recite it at poetry night! Alice :D

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  10. Week 1 Task
    This outline should get you started and we will discuss it tomorrow
    * letter to student
    P1- Introduction of the BTC
    P2- Purpose of Poetry Night
    P3- Audition Process and Poem selection
    P4- Closing

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  11. Poetry Night would not be complete without the performers. Auditions will be held on (date). We encourage students to write their own poems. Our group would like the poems to be inspirational, and expressive. The BTC will be giving feed back on your performance, performers that are invited back are expected to show up at rehersals. The BTC will be judging the performers on their poems by the oringinality, creativity, expressing theirselves, and if the poem is to the theme. The more performers the better. Changing the world one rhyme at a time. Jenny and Kayleigh

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  12. Okay we have to start making announcements and more importantly get that letter finished! Also we have to make posters! Alice :D

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  13. Is the first paragraph supposed to be talking about the BTC commitee or talking about poetry night?

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  14. Giorgia and I made a poetry night poster which is not finished yet.(we will though!) Alice :D

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  15. I think the first paragraph is about the be the change committee. Jenny

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  16. The BTC group at Mcmurrich has been working hard on initiatives like plastic waste and lights out and our past initiatives like 10x10 the food drive and the vow of silence.Poetry night is the newest one with your help poetry will be a huge sucess like our past initiatives!!
    marc

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  17. For the past 4 years students of the Mcmurrich community have had the opportunity to take part in Be the Change Student Committee. The committee give’s students the chance to learn about global issues and promote global citizenship. The BTC group is supporting the Alternative Income Program (AIP) in Sri Lanka. Poetry Night is one of our many initiatives which funds go towards AIP. The AIP is an organization that raises money for families in developing countries for kids to get an education and basic needs such as medical care, clean water, and food.
    Please come out to support the Alternative Income program in our annual Poetry Night. “We are children helping children” This is the first paragraph.

    Alice and Anna :)

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  18. Anna....
    Great job tonight you got a lot of work done. Anna when you are writing up the script please include somewhere that the theme of the poems should be on promoting a positive message and/or inspirational. Also that they can recite a poem alone or with other people. Thanks Ms R

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  19. EDITED AND REVISED LETTER PLEASE READ AND LET ME KNOW IF YOU WOULD LIKE TO MAKE ANY CHANGES BEFORE LUNCH

    Dear Parent(s)/Guardian(s) and Students,

    The Be the Change Student Committee (BTC) will be hosting McMurrich’s 2nd Annual Poetry Night “Changing the World, One Rhyme at a Time”. For the past four years students of the McMurrich community have had the opportunity to take part in the BTC Student Committee who organizes initiatives for McMurrich students to take part in. The committee gives students the chance to learn about global issues and promote global citizenship. The McMurrich Community is supporting the Alternative Income Program (AIP) which is part of Free the Children. Free the Children is an organization that raises awareness and funds for families in developing countries to support children to receive an education and have access to basic needs such as, medical care, clean water and food. Please come out to support the Alternative Income Program at our 2nd Annual Poetry Night. “We are Children Helping Children.”

    “Changing the World, One Rhyme at a Time” is an opportunity for students in the McMurrich Community to show their talent through dance, drama, music, and poetry. Poetry Night will held on Thursday March 25th, 2010 from 6:00pm to 8pm in the school gymnasium. Tickets will be on sale Monday March 8th, 2010, further details will follow after auditions. Throughout the event there will be ten open mic sessions which will give you, the parent audience, a chance to express your talent alongside the McMurrich student performers. There will be an intermission when guests will be able to browse BTC displays.

    Poetry Night would not be complete without performers. Auditions will be held on Tuesday March 2, 2010 and Wednesday March 3rd, 2010 at lunch. We encourage students to write their own poems or choose one from another poet that is inspirational to you. You may audition alone or with another person. The theme of the poems should be inspirational, have a positive message and be expressive. Students should incorporate drama, music, props and/or expression into their poems and auditions. Performers that are invited back are expected to show up at rehearsals the following week. The BTC Student Committee will judging the performers on their poem choice, originality, creativity, expression and it their poem represents the theme. The more performers, the better.

    Auditions:
    Primary: Wednesday March 3, 2010 at 11:35 bring your lunch to room 204
    Junior: Tuesday March 2, 2010 at 11:35 bring your lunch to room 204
    Poem: Originals poems are encouraged or a poem written by another poet
    Theme of Poem: Positive and/or inspirational message

    We hope you can join us at Poetry Night to support the McMurrich Community and AIP. We are “Changing the World, One Rhyme at a Time”

    Sincerely,
    BTC Student Committee

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  20. Alexx that is an awesome poem great job 8)

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  21. Here is the announcement for the classes: Poetry Night Announcement

    Are you interested in joining Poetry Night? Well, on March 25th Poetry Night is taking place. It is just 30 days away! We are looking for original, creative, poems that have an inspiring message. You are encouraged to create your own poem or you can use someone else’s poem that inspired you. All of the profits from Poetry Night will be going to the Alternative Income Program in Sri Lanka. You will express your poem threw music, drama, dance, and language. The primary auditions are on Wednesday, March 3rd at 11:35 in room 204. Junior auditions are going to be held on Tuesday, March 2nd at 11:35 in room 204 and you have to bring your lunch to the audition! Hope to see you there! Remember “Were changing the world one rhyme at a time!” Thank you!

    Alice :D

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  22. This is the invitational letter.

    Dear ______,

    The Be the Change student Commitee of Mcmurrich is a group of students commiting to make a change. It is an oppurtunity for children to promote global and local awareness. The Be the Change Student Committee supports the Alternative Income Program in Sri Lanka.


    We invite you to join us at our 2nd annual Poetry Night, "Chaning the World One Rhyme at a Time". This event give the oppurtunity for the Mcmurrich Community to express thereselves through dance, drama, music, and language. It will be talking place on March 25th from 6-8pm in the Mcmurrich Gymnasium. All the prophits go toward the AIP.


    We hope you can come out to support the Mcmurrich Community and the AIP.We're "Changing the World One Rhyme at a Time"!

    Sincerly,
    The Be the Change Student Committee

    Read and comment please!

    Anna :)

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  23. For the Student of the Month assembly we need to wear our Me to We shirts.
    Anna <3

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  24. A big thank you to Robi Ann and Morgan for putting up Audition Posters after school.

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  25. Thanks for finishing the letter I will give the group a copy to edit and make changes. One suggestion use the word students instead of children. Also you may want to include that they could bring a poem to share.

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  26. You guys have one less thing to worry aboutI put up posters with Morgan so don't worry about the posters.

    Robi-Ann ;)

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  27. We didn't get a chance to give Ms.Ritchie the letters home so could Anna and Kyra please drop them by her class on Thursday morning? Alice :D

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  28. Thanks Morgan and Robi-Ann for putting up the posters! It was a great help! Alice :D

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  29. We need more large size Poetry NIght posters! I can make one at home or maybe at c=school! Alice :D

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  30. 2 of the things we could think about selling are;

    t-shirts and braclets that say...
    Be the Change you want to see in the World or
    Mcmurrich Be the Change!

    Add more if you think of some :)

    Anna <3

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  31. Your invitational letter is edited and has been sent out...thank you Alice

    Monday March 1, 2010

    Dear Mr. Smith,

    The Be the Change Student Committee of Mcmurrich is a group of dedicated Grade 6 students committed to helping make a change in the world. It is an opportunity for McMurrich students to promote awareness of global and local issues. The Be the Change Student Committee (BTC) is committed to supporting Free the Children and the Alternative Income Program (AIP) in Sri Lanka. The AIP supports the local community and is allowing children to have an equal opportunity just like us.

    The BTC Committee is hosting McMurrich’s 2nd annual Poetry Night, "Changing the World One Rhyme at a Time". We would be honoured if you would attend this event that promotes local and global awareness through poetry, drama and music. This event gives the Mcmurrich Community an opportunity to express themselves through dance, drama, music, and language. Changing the World, One Rhyme at a Time will be taking place on Thursday March 25th, 2010 from 6-8pm in the McMurrich Gymnasium. All proceeds from this event will be going toward supporting the Alternative Income Program in Sri Lanka.

    We are hoping you can attend and support this Mcmurrich Community event and the Alternative Income Program. We're "Changing the World One Rhyme at a Time!"

    Sincerely,

    The Be the Change Student Committee

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  32. We need to meet tomorrow to discuss items to sell and tickets sales. Thanks Ms R :o)

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  33. Thanks to Alice for helping with the final edit and mailing out all letter internally in the TDSB and to Free the Children

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  34. Child Labor

    Child Labour is a big issue around the world. Child labour includes: children under the age of 18 years old working long hours each day, abusive treatment by the manager or employer, and limited access or no access to education at all. There are about 218 million children suffering from child laborer. Most of them work in dangerous places such as: mine fields with chemicals and pesticides, or with explosives and hazardous machinery. These children have been affected by poverty which means their living on less than a dollar a day. They have to fend for their selves like adults. Article 32 in UN convention of Children’s Right: You have the right to protection from work that harms you, and is bad for your health and education. If you work, you have the right to be safe and paid fairly.

    •There are 218 million children under 18 that suffer from child labour
    •It’s a BIG ISSUE around the world
    •They have the right to Safety and Protection

    By: Alexx, Christine and Leo n.m.

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  35. You may have noticed that the BE THE CHANGE student committee usually says that the proceeds from our events go to the alternative income program, but what is the alternative income program.

    The alternative income program is a team of politicians that focus on the main problems in Canada which are:

    End Poverty

    Universal Education

    Gender Equality

    Child Health

    Maternal Health

    Combat (HIV/AIDS)

    Environmental Sustainability

    Global Partnership

    These are the eight Millenium Developmental Goals that our government focuses on in Canada.They are very important and critical to resolve.

    Robi-ann ;}

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  36. You can by tickets now for Poetry Night.
    and what you are hearing is right.
    with this ticket you can come in.
    once you hear this poetry you will have a grin
    this is great a memory
    and you will not be sorry

    Remember Were changing the world one rhyme at a time. Ticket sales will be going out this week. Please return all forms by this Friday. Thank you. Kayleigh

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  37. I think thats a very great announcement and I love the fact that you made the announcement a poem itself. Jenny

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  38. The paragraphs are great, I think this will be a great success for all of us, we have to come up with a poem to recite AFTER poetry night. Jenny

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  39. We found a poem to recite after Poetry Night.
    Alexx made it and it's posted on the blog if you would like to see it. You have also divided the parts equally so thats ready!
    Anna :)

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  40. Thank-you Alexx for the poem. Jenny :)

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  41. Alternative Income Program (AIP)
    By Robi-Ann

    The Alternative Income Program works on helping to collect income for developing countries on Agriculture, Women’s Co-operatives, Machinery, and Animals. The Alternative Income Program on agriculture supports the people in devolving countries to proper training, droughts, and proper fertilizer. Having fertilizer it will help provide nutrients for the food they eat and grow bumping up the value of the food. The AIP on Women’s Co-ops focuses on helping to uplift the women in villages in developing countries. The AIP helps send girls to school, give them the proper training they need to help their families. All the income goes directly to the families and goes into savings. Putting income into savings, benefits the women because it could go towards health and education. The Free the Children AIP campaign has gotten women inspired to become involved educating young children. Doing this they gain self confidence, get more money to support their families, and feel like they are worth something.

    “If you teach a woman she will teach the whole village.”
    - Craig Keilburger
    ROBI-ANN;)

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  42. Hey Ms.R,
    My TEL account will not let me send you my write up on AIP unless im repling to something, IF POSIBLE CAN YOU send me somtheing so i can reply you back my write up .

    ROBI-ANN ')

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  43. Anna, is it possible for you to post the poem for closing of poetry night with our names at our parts? Im not too sure which part Im doing. thank you. Jenny

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  44. Alone
    By: Julia C. Reinstein
    ALONE, with no one to talk to. ALONE, having to work and not go to school. ALONE, no food on the table and filthy water. ALONE, when your family is killed in war. ALONE, no one cares about you or your needs. ALONE, Isolated for being a freak. ALONE, no cure for a disease. ALONE, punished for doing nothing wrong. ALONE, kidnapped but nobody can help.
    ALONE, ISOLATED, UNCARED FOR, SILENCED, UNEDUCATED, STARVING, ORPHANED, DISEASED, PUNISHED, HELPLESS, ALONE
    Sometimes we are all alone. What we need is to be together.

    This is the poem I wrote for oopening.
    Julia

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  45. I'm just wondering if for our picture for poems if its supposed be horizontal or vertical? Kayleigh

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  46. Ms. R
    This is the Sri Lanka part from the panphlet that me and Sam are saying tomorrow night. We have shortened to to about 6 lines...that okay?


    Samantha: Before the tsunami hit Sri Lanka in 2006 life was difficult for many people to meet basic needs and it is even more challenging afterwards.

    Anna: For this reason the Be the Change Student Committee was formed to support Sri Lanka through Free the Children.

    Samantha: As soon as the tsunami occurred conditions in Sri Lanka have become worse , leaving many families , communities, and regions of Sri Lanka heart broken.

    Anna: Furthermore affecting 70% of Sri Lanka, damaging 200 school and 100 health care clinics and making it very difficult for many people to make a living.

    Together: Additionally forcing thousands of people into poverty.

    Together: Luckily many organizations, including FTC, are helping Sri Lanka to build a better community in the future.

    Tell me if there needs to be any changes!
    Anna :)

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  47. Ms. R this is my part for the AIP presentation.

    Kayliegh:..............
    Alexx:The alternative income progam also works on supporting women rights in developing countries. The income provides funds to support woman with their own business. Alternative income progam helps to send girls tho school and give them the training they need for their families. All the money donated goes directly to the the families in need. So far AIP has help many families in developing countries. Together: Craig Keilburger belives, " If you can teach a woman, she will teach a whole village.

    Kayliegh is doing farming and animals. Also the opening!
    alexx

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  48. Alternative Income Program

    Kayleigh:The Alternative Income Program helps bring an Income to developing countries to help give families and villages animals, women's cooperatives, machinery and farming.
    Alternative Income is where you can donate money to get an animal for a family or village who needs an animal. For example a cow for milking. Usually the families which are the farmers do not have the land for farming. Due to lack of skills in farming, the land they do have is not the best it could be. As well the farmers do not have the skills to get the most value for their produce. With the Alternative Income Program the farmers get their land fertilized, farming equipment, and most importantly training. Kayleigh

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  49. The order for the ALONEs is Leo, Sonia, Giorgia, Julia, Kayleigh, Robi-Ann, Izy, Kyra, Alice, Leo

    I have to give you the copies tomorrow.
    Julia

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